Controlling LLM Prose

Area VII

Cognitive Load & Information Design

Easing the reader's working memory

Every reader holds a fragile handful of items in working memory. Prose that ignores this forces re-reading; prose that respects it feels effortless. The techniques here—known-before-new ordering, bottom-line-up-front structure, deliberate chunking—are the highest-leverage moves for technical writing that must be understood the first time.

  1. Given–New Information Structure Known first, new last

    Open each sentence with familiar information and end it with the new point.

  2. Cohesion & Topic Chaining Linking sentence to sentence

    Make each sentence's subject connect back to the previous sentence for a smooth thread.

  3. Bottom Line Up Front (BLUF) Conclusion first

    State the conclusion or ask before the supporting detail, not after.

  4. Progressive Disclosure Layered detail

    Reveal information in layers so readers take only the depth they need.

  5. Chunking & List Discipline Grouping within memory limits

    Group related items and cap list length to fit working memory.

  6. Signposting & Metadiscourse Guiding without cluttering

    Use transition and framing words deliberately—enough to guide, not so many they clog.

Example from this area

From Given–New Information Structure—Open each sentence with familiar information and end it with the new point.

BeforeA distributed consensus algorithm is used by the system. Network partitions are tolerated by this algorithm. Availability is its main advantage.
After (given–new)The system uses a distributed consensus algorithm. That algorithm tolerates network partitions, and its main advantage is availability.